Short Story Editing Checklist

An Editing Checklist for Shipshape Stories

Note paper (Check Mark)
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With this editing checklist, you will avoid the basic grammar, spelling, and punctuation mistakes that mark the amateur. Take your creative writing at least as seriously as you do your job: you'd never send a resume out with mistakes and then expect to get the job, would you? You want to present yourself as professionally as possible if you plan to compete in this field: this editing checklist will make sure you do.

Editing Checklist: Spelling

__ Spell check has been run.

__ "It's" and "its" have been used correctly ("it's" is a contraction for "it is"; "its" is possessive).

__ All other homonyms -- which spell check would not catch -- have been checked. (For example, you wouldn't want to write: "She peaked through the blinds and saw the peek of Mt. Ampersand.")

Editing Checklist: Grammar

__ Dialogue is punctuated correctly.

__ Any run-ons or fragments are intentional (and even those are rare).

__ Subjects and verbs agree in number, and verb tenses are consistent throughout.

__ Commas have been used correctly.

__ "That" and "which" have been used correctly.

__ There are no unclear or confusing pronoun references.

__ Sentence structure varies in descriptive or expository passages. (Keep your reader interested.)

__ The sentences are concise.

__ Consideration has been given to word choice. (This means you have consulted a thesaurus.)

__ Basic facts have been checked (especially ones that would be embarrassing to get wrong).

For more on the last few points, see "Developing Your Writing Style."  There are also plenty of books to choose from. I've taught with English Made Simple and Diana Hacker's Rules for Writers, which has online exercises, in the past, but your local library or bookstore (or college bookstore) should have a section of grammar books.

Look for one with exercises and a key at the back.

I know many writers feel that grammar isn't important, that it even in some way inhibits their creativity. But you won't hear baseball players admitting that they don't understand the rules of the game. Even artists study things like perspective and the color spectrum. These are our most basic tools. It's worthwhile to get them straight. And in writing -- unlike baseball or painting -- you'll have plenty of opportunities in both your personal and your professional life to make use of these skills.

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